Friday, 29 June 2012

Aliens Have Landed Story

I woke up in the morning as usual and ate my usual cereal,but I knew that this day was not going to be normal at all. It started off at my boring old school. I began the day with P.E, I didn't like P.E very much and was not in the mood what-so-ever. When it was finished I was straight off to history, which I didn't mind very much. The best part of the day was probably hometime. When I got in I started to root through my bag. I began to realise that I had left my homework in school and it needed to be in for the next day. As I was walking through the estate back to my school I noticed that my estate seemed a lot more weird in the dark. Becoming rather scared as I stumbled upon the giant moss-covered castle-like building that was my school. I noticed an eerie looking figure in the car park. Now regreting even wanting to come here in the first place, I realised that the reason that that I had came here had gone completly out of the window. I presumed thst the only thing that was driving me to stay were I was, was pure curiousity. The figure didn't seem to move much (the reason that I was calling it a "figure" is dominatly becuase it did not look like an ordinary human being). As I slowly moved through the car park and past the "figure" I noticed that it had moved from it's original place. I started to get extremely worried as I was wondering were the it had gone. Hearing a twig snap behind me, I stopped dead in my tracks. I could feel its breath on my neck as it got closer and closer and closer. By the time it had got so close that I could physically touch it. Being a complete and utter idiot I decided to swivel round stare my opponent dead in the eye. Still not being able to see it as it was very dark, I decided to do what any 12-year-old kid does in that position and run for my life. As I was running I started looking behind me every now and again to check if the "creature" was there. To my relief he wasn't. When I stopped running to give myself a break I noticed that I was outside the front door of the reception of my school. There was some lights on but not many, as it was beginning to get rather late. I tried the door.Locked.I tried knocking.No answer. Then all of a sudden another dark figure started to stroll towards the door. It seemed to look exactly like the other one so I started to run in the opposite direction from both of the figures. Running round to the back of the school, I found myself near to the playground. Thinking that the playground would probably be safe. I was wrong. When I got there I noticed that there light in the distance, on the field. Edging closer and closer I watched as some of the lights disappeared into the sky. When these lights went I noticed that another set seemed to come in. I then realised that they were ships. To my sheer amazement there was an army of the "dark figures" were piling off the ships. My jaw hit the floor with shock. I didn't really remember much after that, I think the only thing that I could remember was running home as fast as I could. When I went into school the next day (without my homework!)I was determined to tell my teacher the story of why I hadn't done it. However as I was about to tell her I realised that the dark mystical "figures" that I had seen that night before were not aliens and were not any of the things that I had in mind. They were sheer teachers.
THE END 

1 comment:

  1. Great effort here Jack! Love the build up of tension through the use of short sentences. Would be great if you could edit this to break it up into paragraphs to make it easier on the eye? Very impressive though!

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